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Sugar Alone
Chapter 1
First day of Greatness
   
  Sugar her brother and her dad had just left Foggy ridge, that insane little town. And heading back to Little Ferry. Sugar looked out the window as the drove down the road. "Hey, Sugar?" Sugar looked at her brother with a rather blank expression, "What do you want Slick?" Slick smiled slyly, and in return she gave him a confused look. "Won't it be just sad to leave your BOYFRIEND behind?" He bursted into laughter while Suagr punched him in the gut. Sugars dad stoped the car into a driveway, "Where here," He contiued, "Welcome to the mainsion." Sugar and Slick gazed at it an awe, they've never seen such a big house, let alone live in one. Sugar opend her car door and steped out to be conforted by one of her old friends, Shimmer.

  Shimmer hadnt changed much since she left, except for being taller. Shimmer smiled, "Welcome back Sugar." She huged her and they started to talk about what Suagr did while she was gone, "Did you meet anyone special if ya know what I mean?" The two girls walked up to the house and a butlier opened the door and befor Sugar could answer Shimmer the butlier siad, "Welcome Miss Sumner and friend." Sugar smiled, "Wow I totally forgot about this place." Shimmer taped on her shoulder, "Ahem, you still didnt answer my question Sugar." She looked at Shimmer and shook her head, "Nope no one there was really interesting. What about you? Shimmer? Did you meet someone "special"?

  She blushed a bit, and Sugar started the giggle. "Well...I met a guy named Flippy." Sugar started to laugh a bit, "I knew you would have met someone!" They walked up a flight of stairs and down the hall and truned left. Then left again, then they stood infornt of a door that had inscripted in gold "Sugar Sumner" Once they walked in Sugar noticed it was 11 p.m, "Hey Shimmer, we can talk tomorrow, it's getting late." Shimmer smiled, "Ok see you tomorrow." She took the elavater down stairs and Suagr heard the frount door open, then close. She laid in her gigantic bed that was complete with large purple pillows and a light purple blanket. Sugar claped her hands and the lights went out, and she sat there thinking of Foggy ridge and Snap and all the people there, till she fell asleep.

The next morning, Sugar woke up to the sound of rocks at her window. She sat up remembering that she wasnt in foggy ridge anymore. Sugar sighed and went over to the window and opended it to see Shimmer standing there. Sugar waved at her, and Shimmer waved back. "I'll be down in a minute, just let me get ready." Shimmer gave me a thumbs up signaling that it was ok. I closed the window and pressed a button on my remote that opended a large wardrobe full of lots of clothes. Sugar grabed her camo tank top and some skinny jeans and black Flats. She got dressed left her room and slid down the railing of the stairs and went out the frount door. She went over to the long side of the house where Shimmer was. "What's up Shimmer?" Shimmer smiled, "Hi sugar, you wanna go get some icecream?"

  Sugar looked up at the sun with her hand covering over her eyes, "Yeah sure, why not?" They walked down to the icecream parlor that was down on Meravine road talking about stuff that went on while she was gone -of corsue.- "FLippy lives down on this road." Sugar smiled, "Well then, why dont we see if he can come get some icecream with us?" Shimmer smiled, "Sure..." They walked down a little bit farther and stoped at a brown house with a white porch. Sugar waited by the porch while shimmer went up to the house and knocked at the door. Then above the door there was a window, it opended and flippys head poped out. "Hey Shimmer. How's it going?" Shimmer looked up and smiled, "Hey Flippy, me and my friend Sugar were just going down to the Icecream parlor and wanted to know if you wanted to come?" Flippy smiled, closed his window and ran to the frount door and opended it. "Sure I'll come." The three of them walked down to the parlor and got three triple fudge sundias.

With cherries on top. After awhile a fimlaur face came into the parlor, Sugar turned to see it was her old crush, Josh.....

                         
....To Be Contiued
Ok finally figured out how to get it up here lol

Shimmer belongs to :iconshimmerfan:

Sugar Josh Slick and Sugars dad belong to me :iconpikafan98:

Snap and foggy ridge belongs to :iconnintendork2:
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InSaNe-ChInChilLa Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2010
Awesome story :3 cant wait for the next chapter :D
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pikafan98 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
thanks
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InSaNe-ChInChilLa Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2010
You're welcome :3
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Shimmerfan Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
Starr:
Cute story! I love it! Plz continue it soon! =D

PS Shimmer's actually been Flippy's best friend since she was six, but at the age she's normally drawn in, she starts to crush on him after she breaks up with her boyfriend, Tyler when he cheats on her with her arch rival, Gigi. (Just random info you might need, lol)
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pikafan98 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
lol thanks and thanks for the info
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Shimmerfan Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
Starr:
No prob! =D
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wolfgirlbbalover Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2010
O-M-G! i cant wait till the next chapter!
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pikafan98 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2010
yeah me and my friend are making it up in chat mabye she ont like josh anymore o_O sneaky peaky for ya
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wolfgirlbbalover Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2010
:excited:
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pikafan98 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2010
llo im working on it and its doing goooooood gigitty
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